miércoles, 22 de octubre de 2008

description of a deer.


It's a deer. It's big and thin. It's brown and spot white. It's got four legs, two fam and two pink ears.It's eats grass.It can jump and very run.It can't fly and swim. It like very run. The Ana,María, Alberto, Claudia and Gonzalo.

2 comentarios:

English dijo...

Hi, your description is very good though there are some mistakes. you must correct them, ok? TRY IT! GOOD LUCK!

Remember... you must write...By Claudia, Alberto, Gonzalo...

Your teacher, Lidia.

English dijo...

hol esta muy chulo ...¡se parece a bambi!yo os doy mi comentario porque esta muy bien echo. claudia