viernes, 5 de junio de 2009

My cats.


It's a Duke and Mina.It's cats.They're smalls and black and white.They've got body strong and long tail.They eat meats and fish.They live in my house.They can jumps.They like run,their very rapids.They're from in Sevilla.
They're nice and loving.
I love cats!

Gonzalo F.J. 5ºA.

1 comentario:

English dijo...

Gonzalo,muy bien el hecho de que hayas intentado describir en plural.. pero debes revisar tu escrito e intenta detectar los errores para corregirlos, ok? Ya sabes que de los errores se aprende muchísimo.

Your teacher, Lidia.