Their name's are Jackie and Nuca.They're 3 years old.They live in the cave.They're from Scotland.
He's got short,brown and straight hair.He's got brown eyes.He's nice,brave,naughty and talkative.
His favourite colours are blue and yellow.His favourite food are meat and grass.His favourite animal is bear.He likes travelling to Romania,France and England.He wants to go climbing in the mountains on Saturday.
She's got short,white and straight hair.She's got brown eyes.She's nice,shy and sensitive.
Her favourite colours are pink and orange.Her favourite food are meat and grass.Her favourite animal is bear.She likes travelling to Germany,Brazil and Russia.She wants to go sailing in the sea on Wednesday.
By:Cynthia and Mary.
Course:6ºA
5 comentarios:
Vuestra composición está muy bien, muy extensa..Pero habéis mezclado distintos pronombres y no queda muy claro de quién estáis hablando. They (their), He (his), She (her)
Intentad aclararlo, ok? Revisar el escrito, ok?
Habéis aprovechado muy bien el tiempo. Seguid trabajando así.
Your teacher, Lidia.
esta muy bien, es larga.. pero si le pusierais colores quedaria mucho mas bonito.
ana u 6ºB
Great!! Fantastic!!!
Your teacher, Lidia.
esta muy larga pero esta fantastica
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