Her name is Esmeralda.She's got twenty years old.She's from Spain.She's live in the forest.She's got red winds.
She's got wearing black dress.She's got brown eyes and she's got long black and straight hair.She's brave,sensitive and moody.She's pretty.
She's like fly and sleep. She's go for a walk at night.She's don't like travel or paint.She's favourite colours are red and black.She's can fly.She's want to go fly in the forest.
By:Carmen ,Maria and Manuel D .
2 comentarios:
Chicos tenéis que revisar vuestra composición y corregirla; hay bastantes errores muy importantes. Debéis coger los apuntes hasta que dominéis el redactar en tercera persona del singular (he / she)Intentad corregirla, si tenéis dudas, preguntadme.
Your teacher, Lidia.
corregir los fallos y mirar la libretaque os enrreliais un poco en describir
De Cynthia 6ºA
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