My name is Copito. I'm one year old. I'm from Spain. I live in Écija.
I'm small and fat. I've got short black and white hair and blue eyes.
My hobby is playing with the ball. I'm good at running. I like playing and swimming. I don't like singing or dancing. I can run and jump. I can't fly or climb.My hobby is playing football.
Raúl Ruiz Madero 5A. Patri
I'm small and fat. I've got short black and white hair and blue eyes.
My hobby is playing with the ball. I'm good at running. I like playing and swimming. I don't like singing or dancing. I can run and jump. I can't fly or climb.My hobby is playing football.
Raúl Ruiz Madero 5A. Patri
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Vuestra composición está muy bien. Os he puesto en negrita los dos fallitos que debéis corregir, ok? Y recordad que los adjetivos los separamos con comas. Corregirlo, ok?
Os animo a que la próxima composición que escribais sea más larga, ok?
Very good!!! Excellent!!
Your teacher, Lidia.
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